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SAI IS SO AWESOMEEEEEE
No, seriously, this thing is the BEST. Lineart and painting is so smooth...and I think I said this already but whatever. SAI needs the praise. So yeah, I finally finished coloring it. Sigh, I still need to finish my art trade...sorry! Excuse the lame BG, I couldn't think of anything. *shot* The colors don't really match either. *hackedbrutallytodeath* LOL and the title is really...weird DX I would prefer critique on coloring, I'm still working on anatomy and I'm pretty sure I have most of what's wrong down. But if there are any glaring errors please tell me THE HAIR SUUUUUUUCKS and the bag is too shiny. Ugh, I still have to figure out how to color hair the way I want it to look using the painting style. Kay, I need to work on my social studies HW so bye! ~Peri Done in SAI, BG in PS Elements 6 CommentsAw thanks so much!
-- ~Peri-Who-Is-AWESOME Please take a look at my gallery! It won't be a waste of your time, I hope XD An example of my recent stuff: [link] LOL don't feel bad! It's okay ^^ And thanks, I'm glad you like the hair
-- ~Peri-Who-Is-AWESOME Please take a look at my gallery! It won't be a waste of your time, I hope XD An example of my recent stuff: [link] Eh, do what? And THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH I'm so happy that you like it
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Critiques
Okay the hair. I like the color, but I think the shading in the right portion is a bit too slanted. At the top you have hair shadow going diagonally down when the strand isn't at that angle. Try to keep the shadowing at the same angle going with the grain if you get me.
Great job shading clothes, I don't think I have anything to say on that. The bag looks fine to me, though I think that a more brown base color would work better than the goldish brown if you want it to look less shiny.
Great job! keep improving
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