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Bubblegum Pop by *PeriSnale:iconPeriSnale:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2009 *PeriSnale
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Artist's Comments

SAI IS SO AWESOMEEEEEE :love:

No, seriously, this thing is the BEST. Lineart and painting is so smooth...and I think I said this already but whatever. SAI needs the praise. :D

So yeah, I finally finished coloring it. Sigh, I still need to finish my art trade...sorry! ^^; I'm such a selfish slacker person...

Excuse the lame BG, I couldn't think of anything. *shot* The colors don't really match either. *hackedbrutallytodeath* LOL and the title is really...weird DX

I would prefer critique on coloring, I'm still working on anatomy and I'm pretty sure I have most of what's wrong down. But if there are any glaring errors please tell me :)

THE HAIR SUUUUUUUCKS and the bag is too shiny. Ugh, I still have to figure out how to color hair the way I want it to look using the painting style. :iconorzplz:

Kay, I need to work on my social studies HW so bye!

~Peri

Done in SAI, BG in PS Elements 6

Critiques


:iconpinkpolka234:
~pinkpolka234 Sep 15, 2009, 1:32:18 PM
First off, great lineart! I enjoyed coloring it and your thin and clean linearts are SWEET.

Okay the hair. I like the color, but I think the shading in the right portion is a bit too slanted. At the top you have hair shadow going diagonally down when the strand isn't at that angle. Try to keep the shadowing at the same angle going with the grain if you get me. :D

Great job shading clothes, I don't think I have anything to say on that. The bag looks fine to me, though I think that a more brown base color would work better than the goldish brown if you want it to look less shiny.

Great job! keep improving :D
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~mikicoola123anime Sep 15, 2009, 12:54:18 PM
D'aaww!! I LOVE it!! I loove your stylle!!! :clap:

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~Heh heh... ^^; My bbadd~
~Every rain cloud has a rainbow ♥~
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*PeriSnale Sep 15, 2009, 12:54:57 PM
Aw thanks so much! :hug:

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~Peri-Who-Is-AWESOME

Please take a look at my gallery! It won't be a waste of your time, I hope XD

An example of my recent stuff: [link]
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~mikicoola123anime Sep 15, 2009, 12:58:01 PM
Welcome! :glomp:

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~Heh heh... ^^; My bbadd~
~Every rain cloud has a rainbow ♥~
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~pinkpolka234 Sep 15, 2009, 1:27:22 PM
I feel bad taht I colored it before you. :P Anyways great job! Nice coloring and sai is nice. Great job on the hair!
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*PeriSnale Sep 15, 2009, 1:28:28 PM
LOL don't feel bad! It's okay ^^ And thanks, I'm glad you like the hair :D

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~Peri-Who-Is-AWESOME

Please take a look at my gallery! It won't be a waste of your time, I hope XD

An example of my recent stuff: [link]
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*arielucia Sep 15, 2009, 8:52:22 PM
I LOVE SAI TOO~! XD

love this one, love the gradient, and the shadings on her hair, and the shadings on the skirt
DDDD8 i always wanted to do that~ but failed "orz

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:shamrock: Too kind it moved me to tears--
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*PeriSnale Sep 16, 2009, 11:45:49 AM
Eh, do what? And THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH I'm so happy that you like it :D You awesome artist person you XD

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~Peri-Who-Is-AWESOME

Please take a look at my gallery! It won't be a waste of your time, I hope XD

An example of my recent stuff: [link]
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~sunshine-armchair Sep 16, 2009, 3:27:44 PM
v. awesome- I really like it!
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~Lolita-Hagiko Sep 16, 2009, 4:24:40 PM
Smexiful!

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Sometimes I would run away just to see if any person in the world would care enough to follow :glomp:
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